Things that are big:
- "The wrinkled sea beneath him crawls." The sea, the heaving grey sea, so broad and deep that at first it doesn't even seem to move.
- Thunderclouds that rise like blue castles to blot out the sun.
- A hurricane viewed from space, that delicate furious spiral.
- A drop of salty water flung from an ocean wave onto your lip.
- Hairs on the leg of a spider.
- Flat facets and mineral cleavages on a single grain of sand.
- Salt spilled on a slate floor.
- An individual wood pore.
P.S. Extra credit for anyone who -- without Google -- can identify the source (author, work) of the quote in the first bullet point. Extra EXTRA credit for anyone who can recite the work from memory. Don't worry, it's very short. And very cool. Comment ... away!
2 comments:
I had to google it, but what a marvelous poem! I love me some metaphors and I have a tendency to overdo it, but it is such a joy to play with language, to try to conjure up images that really spark in a reader's mind. Such fun!
Hi Laini -- thanks for stopping by! I have to admit that I never knew what "purple prose" was until people started reading my rough drafts. Oops. But you're right: metaphors are hard to resist! Who ever thought that writing would involve restraint....
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